Coffee Break

Here’s a pic I started doodling behind my table at MCM London in October…

As usual, I began in pencil…

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Added inks…

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Scanned the picture into my mac…

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Started the colouring process, marking out different flat areas on different layers of Photoshop – background…

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Midground…

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Foreground (I wasn’t planning to keep this bright pink, but at this stage it’s easier to see what I’m doing with a strong contrasting colour)…

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Here’s these main areas with the line work on top…

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And here’s the different areas completely marked, and the colours adjusted.
I also added some shadow on the ground…

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Now there’s some texture on the tube things…

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I’ve started to add more details to the ground colour and changed the big creature’s pupils.  Less cute but more funny looking…

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Now there’s texture on the ground too, and the woman is completely coloured, including lighting.
The woman’s face wasn’t standing out enough against the tubes behind her, so I added a bit of white around her to spotlight her a bit…

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I toned down the white, so it was barely noticeable but still does the job.
I added the basic colours for the creature.  I’m trying to limit the range of colours to give the pic its own vibe.

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It was great focussing on different textures in this piece…
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And there you go! All done…

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This is going to end up as the cover from a new Tempo Lush collection coming out next year…

Fixing mistakes as I go along! Mermaid Painting Process

Okay, this was a really enjoyable commission I did at the end of last year.  I know it’s not always possible, but it’s great when a client gives you free range to do what you want.  Even more so when you can trust they aren’t going to ask you to change the final thing!

The client was after a painting somewhat along the lines of this Alphonse Mucha style Lucy the Octopus strip…
2015-06-03-150… but it needed to be an A2 size picture in watercolour and ink rather than ink and then Photoshop colour of the Lucy strip.

I didn’t have too long to get the painting done, due to other commitments, so just dived in with some quick ideas in my sketchbook…
Mermaid-Blog-01-Idea Mermaid-Blog-02-Rough-PlanNext I was on to the pencils…Mermaid-Blog-03-Pencils Mermaid-Blog-04-Pencils Mermaid-Blog-05-Pencils Mermaid-Blog-06-PencilsThen inking with a brush…Mermaid-Blog-08-Inks Mermaid-Blog-09-Inks Mermaid-Blog-10-Inks Mermaid-Blog-11-InksThen I got out the old sharpie and marked out frame borders on my drawing board. Easy as… OH €£@*!  I’VE DRAWN A LINE RIGHT THROUGH THE MERMAID’S HAIR!!!!
This is a DISASTER!  I can’t click undo like on Photoshop, and I can’t tippex over it as that will mess up the watercolour when I lay that down!  AAARRRRGGGGHHH!Mermaid-Blog-12-mistakeFortunately, I’ve done the painting on nice thick watercolour paper, which means with a stanley knife I can scrape off the top layer of paper … Mermaid-Blog-13-mistake… and get rid of the black line!
It certainly leaves a dent but hopefully, by the time I add watercolour no one will notice!
Mermaid-Blog-14-mistake Mermaid-Blog-15-InksSo back to the inking, mainly with a brush but also with a bit of drawing pen…Mermaid-Blog-16-Inks Mermaid-Blog-17-Inks Mermaid-Blog-18-Inks Mermaid-Blog-19-Inks Mermaid-Blog-20-Inks Mermaid-Blog-21-Inks Mermaid-Blog-22-InksTime to erase the pencils… Mermaid-Blog-23-eraseAdd a quick plaster to my finger which has a blister from so much inking… Mermaid-Blog-24-blisterA few final details with a fine pen…Mermaid-Blog-25-Finished-InksThen I lay down the watercolours…Mermaid-Blog-26-watercolourI’m using some new liquid watercolours, and everything’s going fine.  Right?Mermaid-Blog-27-watercolourAll going swimmingly (no pun intended)… Yep.  No problems here!Mermaid-Blog-28-a-watercolourOH €£@*!  Who am I kidding?  I’ve done the blue borders way too dark! 
It’s a general rule of thumb with watercolour to build up the lighter tones first, then work up in layers to the stronger richer tones, BUT I’VE LEFT MYSELF WITH NOWHERE TO GO!
Mermaid-Blog-28-things-go-wrongDrastic action is required!
I take an army of wet Q-tips and try to remove the blue…Mermaid-Blog-29-things-go-wrongIt barely makes a difference… Mermaid-Blog-30-things-go-wrongI carry on adding other colours in denial.Mermaid-Blog-31-things-go-wrong Mermaid-Blog-32-things-go-wrong Mermaid-Blog-33-things-go-wrongBut in the end, I get out the gouache paint!  Unlike the translucent watercolours, gouache is opaque so I can go over the blue frames with a paler greyer blue tone.
It takes a couple of hours but worth it to save the painting!  The eye is now drawn away from the frame to the more important stuff in the picture!
HOORAY!  JOB DONE!  Mermaid-Blog-34-things-go-wrong Mermaid-Blog-35-things-go-wrong Mermaid-Blog-36-watercolour Mermaid-Blog-37-watercolour Mermaid-Blog-38-watercolourNow I try a new trick!  Using masking tape I make little star shapes to mask the next layer of watercolour.Mermaid-Blog-39-masking-tape-trickAfter it’s dry, I carefully peel off the tape to reveal lovely little stars below.  It works pretty well…Mermaid-Blog-40-masking-tape-trickBut OH €£@*!  The tape has ripped some of the painting.  PROBLEM NUMBER THREE! Mermaid-Blog-41-masking-tape-trickBut a quick touch up with drawing pen and watercolour and all is well! Mermaid-Blog-42-masking-tape-trickAll done, and the client will never know all the issues I had attempting to bring this thing to life (unless I write them all out in a blog).Mermaid-Blog-44-Finish

HOW TO MAKE A COMIC STRIP (or more accurately How to make the 93rd installment of Lucy the Octopus): VIDEO!!!

To finish up my blog series on the details of making an installment of Lucy the Octopus please find a short video overview of the process.  Cheers!

For Part 1 of this series of blogs, The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!
For Part 4: Inks, click here!
For Part 5: Erasing, Scanning & Cleaning Up click here!

HOW TO MAKE A COMIC STRIP (or more accurately How to make the 93rd instalment of Lucy the Octopus) PART 6: COLOURS

For Part 1 of this series of blogs, The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!
For Part 4: Inks, click here!
For Part 5: Erasing, Scanning & Cleaning Up click here!

So we’re on to the final leg of the mission to create this Lucy the Octopus comic strip.  The physical drawing has been completed, scanned into my mac and cleaned up ready for a dusting of colour…Scan-7-Lettering-adjustedThis is probably my favourite stage of the work.  It’s the home stretch and my brain doesn’t have to work as hard as when I do other parts of the process.  It’s also cool to see how easily a splash of colour can bring an image to life.

That being said, I’m not suggesting that colouring in general is an easy task.  There are many comic colourists who not only put much more detail and time into their work but are infinitely more skilled.  A great colourist can control the mood of a scene, suggest complex lighting and texture and help depict the physical structure of the characters and objects in a comic panel.

My own colouring rules however (for a typical episode of Lucy the Octopus at least) were developed to make things as quick and easy for myself as possible…

LUCY THE OCTOPUS COLOURING RULES

1) No lighting

Generally, I colour characters and objects as though they are unaffected by light sources falling on them.

So Lucy and Puffy are the same colour and tone regardless of being out of doors or in, as below…
Colour-Rules-Sample-Same-in-LightThis saves a heap of time, and I’m happy with the flat look it gives the comic.

For a few special strips, such as in the panel below, I added one lighter tone and one darker shade to each character or object. This limited range of colour variation is far from naturalistic but adds a small touch of dimension and lighting.
Colour-Rules-Sample-With-Light2) Repeated colours are consistent, strip to strip

The way any given colour looks to the human eye, varies according to what colour it is placed next to.  An artist can chose to consider this carefully or ignore it completely.
Guess what?  I go for the easy option and ignore it.

By this I mean that virtually everytime you see a character in the strip, such as Lucy’s sister Patricia below, the tone of their skin, hair and any clothes they may wear are identical.  This is regardless of whether it’s night or day, whether they are inside a room or outside in the street.

I’m never considering what tone of yellow should Patricia be today?Colour-Rules-Sample-Same-in-Any-StripThe above panels are from strips done over three years.  I always just copy the exact tone from the first time I ever coloured her (below).  On Photoshop this is done using the eyedropper tool.
Colour-Rules-Sample-Patricia-Colour-SourceThe technique of repeating the exact shades of colours for characters is similar to how animated cartoons are often made, especially ones on a tight budget.  The colours, design and backgrounds of Cartoon Network’s Samurai Jack were especially an inspiration in making Lucy.

3) Limit coloured lines

Changing the outline of part of a drawing from black to anything else can look great and be an effective tool.  Lucy’s patches are coloured with a blue outline, so it’s hard to avoid using this technique altogether, though I try to limit myself as much as possible.
As well as the patches you can see coloured outlines below on the air bubbles around Puffy and the KLIK sound effect.
Colour-Rules-Sample-Coloured-Lines4) Fill or Colour underneath the lines?

There are plenty of online tutorials on the subject so I won’t go into too much detail, but for those who don’t know, there’s essentially two main ways of colouring work on Photoshop.

Arguably the most straightforward  is to click inside the outlines of the shape you want to fill with colour, using the PaintBucket tool, and voila!  The shape is the colour you selected.  I use this for 95% of my colouring on Lucy.

The second technique, which some folk use for their entire colouring process (as do I on some other projects) is to create each block of colour stroke by stroke using the Pencil tool.  You do this by creating a duplicate layer of your linework, (keeping the initial layer safely unadjusted if you need it) setting it to Multiply so that it’s essentially transparent except for the linework, then doing the colouring-in on another new layer below.

Now a couple of things worth quickly mentioning that I do in the majority of Lucy strips, though happen not to in Episode 93…

5) Shadows

As I said earlier, I don’t generally add lighting to my Lucy panels, but I do add simple ground shadows to characters and objects.  This is usually done in Photoshop by forming an ellipse shape with the Marquee tool, then filling it with a solid colour…
Colour-Rules-Sample-ShadowI think I picked up this shadow style from Peppa Pig.

6) Photographic Textures

One design aspect that I could have saved a lot of time by not including in the Lucy strip is the use of photographic textures added in Photoshop.

I like the feel they give the strip though and the contrast between rocky and sandy backgrounds with the flat blacks of colour of the characters and other subjects such as the spaceship and sea creature in this example…
Colour-Rules-Sample-Rocky-TextureI also add a wooden look to Lucy’s guitar, Ramani’s bass and a few other bits and bobs.  Since doing the panel below I’ve generally stopped adding wood to Geary’s drumsticks as it’s not really noticeable once the strips are reduced to print or online publication size.
Colour-Rules-Sample-Wood-TextureOkey dokey – let’s look at Episode 93 specifically…

STEP BY STEP COLOURING EPISODE 93

I start filling in spaces with blocks of colour, beginning with the characters that take up the most space…
There’s not too many decisions to make here.  Colours are dictated by the characters’ previous appearances in the strip…Colour-01Same goes for the school bus…
Colour-02Next up I colour the sea monster in Panel 2.
I leave its other appearance in the final panel for now as I have something else in mind for that…
Colour-03I use the Magic Wand tool to select Miss Faridani’s hair and draw in the blonde streak
Colour-04Using the PaintBucket tool, I click on the outline of Lucy’s patches in Panel 4 to change their colour.
Colour-05I want to do the same to the outline of the sticker on the glass behind her.  However, as that shape is connected to the speech bubble above it, if I just clicked on the outline of the sticker I’d change the colour of the outlines for all connecting linework – practically the whole strip.
To avoid this I select the linework with the Magic Wand tool and just colour the bit I want to change using the Pencil Tool
Colour-06Earlier when I was laying out the position of each character in pencil, I was very much aware of how the colours of each of them would impact where they ended up.
For example I might avoid two bright pink characters being placed next to each other, so as to maintain contrast and definition within the image.
In this way, you could say the colour process actually began back at the penciling stage.
Colour-07I carry on filling in the colours of the characters whose colours are determined by the previous appearances in the strip.
I also start to make choices as to the colours which are not predetermined, such as the background of Panel 1.Colour-08

I base my colour choices for backgrounds on what will make the main subjects of the panel (usually characters in the foreground) stand out.  This can mean using a less intense colour as in Panel 1, or a contrasting colour as in Panel 2 and 3.
Colour-09For the final panel I decide to colour all the subjects in one colour – a rare bit of mood colouring for the Lucy strip).  To do this, I remove the purple I’d already put there, then colour on the layer beneath the linework.
Colour-10I add a background colour to Panel 4.
Colour-13-white-on-glassNow I want to add some highlights to the windows of the school bus to give it a reflective glassy feel.
If I started adding highlights (professional technical term up ahead warning) willy-nilly, then it would be tricky to remove them from the areas which aren’t supposed to be glass.
So on a new layer above the linework, I map out the glass areas.
Colour-11-with-masksHere’s those masked areas without any of the rest of the drawing just to show you…
Colour-12-masks-onlyNow I can select all these areas using the Magic Wand tool, hide the layer with these masks, then add my highlights on a new layer.  For this I use the Paintbrush tool with a soft brush.
Colour-14-with-lightBelow again are the masked areas without the drawing, this time with the white glassy highlights.  They’re not naturalistic in where they might fall on the curved glass of the bus.  Instead I add them according to what works best over the character positions and existing layout.
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Now to try something else for that last panel, as it doesn’t sell the peril of the scenario as it is…
Colour-18Red is good to express danger and emotion, but not sure it works as a background here, so I change the actual subjects within the panel to red rather than blue and drop the background tone altogether.
Colour-19Right… just a few details to go.  I change the colour of the sound effects, adding a white outline around the AAAAAAARRGGHH to make it pop a bit more…
Colour-20Incidentally, if you’re curious as how much of the colour was done by pointing/clicking within the linework and how much was done with the Pencil tool on a layer below, here’s that lower layer by itself…
Colour-21-Colour-layers-onlyAnyhoo, just putting the finishing touches to the colour work.  I add white lines to give a metalic finish to the bus and change the colour of the caption in Panel 1, the copyright text and my signature.

For those sort of details, I like to repeat colours that have been used elsewhere in the episode.  It helps tie the colour composition together.Colour-22So we’re done!

Almost.

I find it’s virtually always worthwhile looking at a seemingly finished strip with fresh eyes the following day (deadlines allowing).  You pick up on a few points that can be improved and sometimes even discover why you had a niggling doubt as to whether a strip is working or not.

So in this case I decide the movement lines in the last panel would look better in red, matching the other elements of the panel.
Colour-23Then one final thing is bothering me.

Anyone who’s been reading all of these process blogs (Bless you!) may have picked up on a recurring theme.  Even though you can divide the process of work into different key stages
Writing
Lettering
Layout
Pencils
Ink
Colours
…at any point you might be considering future stages or adjusting details from earlier stages. Case in point, is my final tweak on this strip.  Not a colour adjustment but something directly relating to the dialogue from the writing stage…

In Panel 4 Lucy and Kate debate holding on to the window handle.
Kate says “SHUT IT LUCY!  WHY SHOULD I LISTEN TO…”
I realise there’s a possibility that readers may take the words “SHUT IT!” as a reference to shutting the window rather than just Lucy stopping talking.
Not the biggest disaster, but I do want the strip to read as smoothly as possible without there being any confusion even for a fraction of a second, so I change Kate’s dialogue, making sure that the new words still fit comfortably in the given speech bubble…
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 Pheweee!

Now I’ve filled 6 blogs with not only my general techniques for making Lucy, but also explanations of tiny details.  Hopefully it gives a decent overview of the thought process involved.
It’s important to remember that most of the creative choices I’ve discussed are split second decisions and not as drawn out as they may seem when spelled out in writing.  Solving the problems along the way makes for fun moments that take a creator step by tiny step, closer to the comic looking in reality like it does in their head.

Down the line, I will use the full size Photshop file when creating the layout for the printed comic using Adobe InDesign.
Now though, I use the Save for Web function on Photoshop to create a low-res JPEG of the episode (980 x 335 pixels).  I then schedule it on my WordPress site to be published online on the desired date.

Then we’re on to the next strip!  Bear in mind, by the time I’ve finished one strip I’ll most likely have written, lettered and layed out panels for several upcoming strips so I can dive straight into the penciling again.

Thanks for reading – hope it was vaguely informative and remotely interesting!

Stay tuned for the final special entry in this blog which should tie everything together!

For Part 1 of this series of blogs, The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!
For Part 4: Inks, click here!
For Part 5: Erasing, Scanning & Cleaning Up click here!
For a video overview click here!

HOW TO MAKE A COMIC STRIP (or more accurately How to make the 93rd instalment of Lucy the Octopus) PART 5: ERASING, SCANNING & CLEANING UP

For Part 1 of this series of blogs, The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!
For Part 4: Inks, click here!

So where was I?  Oh yeah, I’ve written the strip, drawn it in pencil and inked it.  Now, I’m almost ready to take the strip onto my mac and play with it there.Scan-1ERASING

Before we finish with the drawing on paper though we need to get rid of all those left over pencil marks.

Some comic artists do their pre-ink drawing in blue pencil.  This is super handy as it generally doesn’t get picked up when the image is scanned into the computer.  So blue pencil artists can feel smug that they can miss out the whole erasing stage.  Personally, I like to work in traditional lead pencil (albeit a mechanical one), though maybe one day I’ll jump on the blue pencil bandwagon.

Anyway, for Luddites like me who still want to use an eraser, here are some tips (which are expressed far better in  The Art Of Comic-Book Inking by Gary Martin).  Seems hardly worth mentioning how to do something so simple right?  If you’ve ever ruined a drawing by scrunching it up through careless erasing or smudging inks by letting tiny drops of spit land on the paper while blowing eraser crumbs away you may think it’s worth taking a moment to consider careful erasing!

So first up, I make sure I’m holding the paper firmly in the section that I’m erasing at the time.  I use a good quality, medium textured eraser.Erasing-1I erase the pencils from the paper methodologically, area by area.

Then I bring out Captain Brushtastic!  You may have a different name for your Draughtsman’s brush.  Either way, I can’t recommend this beauty any higher!  It’s so speedy, brushing away leftover eraser bits, and no spittle on the paper from blowing them away – hoorah!Erasing-2I double check I haven’t missed any pencil marks and place the paper in my scanner.

SCANNING

I use an A3 Mustek Scanner (sang to the tune of Mustang Sally) to scan the A3 paper.  Most likely it’s not the best quality hardware in the world but relatively affordable for an A3 scanner.  I had one that broke down only after 5 years of loyal service so was happy to get another.

I’ve heard folk adamantly insist on the correct settings to scan ink work, and others adamantly insist the polar opposite.  Let me show you a few possibilities for scanning black and white linework

The following image shows the strip scanned as Greyscale.  You can play around with the contrast and brightness etc afterwards but this is what the pure scan looks like…
Scan-2-GreyAnother option is to adjust the contrast of the scan itself, rather than doing it afterwards.  Below the contrast is set to 88.  We get something close to pure black and white…
Scan-3-Contrast-88The way I generally scan my Lucy artwork is on the Line setting.  Like this, the scanner looks at the picture and tells every pixel that makes up the digital image to pick a side – black or white?  So this is not appropriate for any inks with grey washes, but for pure black line work and blocking, it’s just right.
Scan-4-Line-without-clean-upCLEANING UP

Looking at the scanned image, I check that there are no unwanted marks caused by dust on the scanner or anything else.  If so I use the Photoshop pencil set to white and clear these up.  I try not to be too super precious about tiny marks.

Now is where those arrows I added while inking come in handy.  These point out any areas which need cleaning up at this stage, so I get these sorted out along with any other bits and pieces I’ve noticed.
Scan-5-Line-after-clean-upNow I take my scanned image and add it as a layer to my original Photoshop file of the comic strip which included the panel layout and lettering.

I set that layer to Multiply (which means I can see through it, except for the black linework).  I adjust the size of the image so it sits tightly over the original panel layout.  If necessary, I rotate the image a touch so it’s lined up as perfectly as possible…  Scan-6-Placed-in-file-with-letteringI tweak the position of the lettering, including the copyright line and remove the panel guides and notes.Scan-7-Lettering-adjustedNow the strip is ready to fill with a rainbow of love, in other words, colour!

See you next time for the final part of this series!

For Part 1 of this series of blogs, The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!
For Part 4: Inks, click here!
For Part 6: Colours click here!
For a video overview click here!

HOW TO MAKE A COMIC STRIP (or more accurately How to make the 93rd instalment of Lucy the Octopus) PART 4: INKS

For Part 1 of this series of blogs, The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!

So here I am, in the midst of creating the 93rd Lucy the Octopus strip.
Pencils-12Having completed the pencils (see above) and while the paper is still stuck with masking tape on to my drawing board, I get out my inking tools.  These consist of permanent ink black drawing pens in a range of sizes:

Fine line drawing pens, either Staedtler Pigment Liners or Uni Pin Fine Lines with the following tip sizes: 0.8, 0.5, 0.3, 0.2, 0.1
Sharpie markers: Fine point and Chisel Tip
Set Squareinking-toolsI don’t recall ever using a ruler to ink something in the Lucy strip.  The only perfectly straight edges are the panel borders which I draw out in 0.5 pen using the horizontal bar of the drawing board and a set square.

I leave the last panel without a frame to aid with the feeling of Lucy and Kate being lost and vulnerable.

Prior to that I inked the lettering for the KERLANK sound effect to avoid that over lapping with my panel borders.Inks-2Next up, I free the paper from the shackles of the masking tape!  This gives me the option to rotate the paper as I ink to reach the most comfortable position for drawing each line and curve.  This is even more important when I use a brush to ink as oppose to pens (which I’ve done a few Lucy strips requiring a different style, as well as lots of other work).

Sometimes ‘ll stay at my drawing board to ink, but often I’ll sit with my knees up and a couple of old sketch books to lean on.  It’s not essential but preferable to ink facing a black and white cat a few feet away.Inks-3Before I get on to the real art, I draw out the speech bubbles in a 0.5 line.

You can see below how it looks easier to draw a curve when you can adjust the paper to a comfortable angle (but I still mess it up)!Inks-4That little arrow I draw is to remind me to fix the mistake with the speech bubble after I scan the work into my Mac (ready to colour on Photoshop).  It’s quicker to do this than to use tippex or opaque white paint on the actual paper.
I’d wondered if I was the only inker to do this but I saw that when Mike Medaglia did some art for Tempo Lush Tales, he’d also done little arrows to show him where to fix things up on the computer.  Maybe lots of folk do it!

Inking is an opportunity to look at the pencils with fresh eyes and make tweaks and improvements to the composition.  With this in mind, I add an extra A at the beginning of the scream in Panel 3.

Not sure if it’s a bit of a faux pas inking the signature before completing everything else, but I do it anyway, because nobody tells Richy how to roll and I’m a complete badass.Inks-5On to inking the actual drawing. Sometimes I do this panel by panel. More usually I approach the strip as a whole and work from the thickest pens down the to the finest.  This saves a bit of time by not stopping to change pens so often.

So I start with the fine point Sharpie and do the character’s eyes.  No need for Chisel tip Sharpie today.Inks-6A good rule of thumb is draw things in the foreground in a thicker line than things behind in a picture.  That’s why I tackle Mrs Faridani in 0.8 line and will do the passengers behind her with a thinner pen.
Inks-7I also use the thicker line of the 0.8 pen to give the feeling of weight under elements such as the underside of the monster in Panel 2 and the handle in Panel 4. Inks-8I finish with the 0.8 pen and start with the 0.5.Inks-9I continue to work on the first 3 panels…Inks-10…until the 0.5 line work is done.Inks-11I switch to the 0.3 pen to work on finer lines, including characters further towards the background.Inks-12Finally I use 0.2 and 0.1 pens for the finest details, like the tiny passengers in Panels 2 & 5 and the characters in the deepest depths of the background of Panel 1.Inks-13The drawing part of the process is complete!

Join me next time for a thrilling look into… erasing the pencil marks! 

I may be overselling this.

For Part 1 of this series of blogs, The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!
For Part 5: Erasing, Scanning & Cleaning Up click here!
For Part 6: Colours click here!
For a video overview click here!

HOW TO MAKE A COMIC STRIP (or more accurately How to make the 93rd instalment of Lucy the Octopus) PART 3: PENCILS

For Part 1 of this series of blogs: The Foundations of Writing, click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!

So where were we?  Oh yes!  I’ve come up with my story, written my script and laid out my lettering and panels as seen below.
Lettering-6---Layout-from-updated-templateNow it’s time to start drawing what will eventually look like this…Planning-01THUMBNAILS

I’d recommend starting the drawing process for virtually all comics by doing thumbnails (small quick very rough sketches planning what you intend to draw), after character designs and other preliminary studies.  It almost always saves time in the long run and gets better results.

I have to admit that with Lucy I usually skip a proper thumbnail stage.  I seem to manage to get away with this because…

  • I do a sort of mental thumbnail stage in my head when I lay out the lettering and the panels.
  • By now I have drawn these characters hundreds of times before.
  • The undersea characters are relatively simple to draw anyway. Drawing humans would be a whole different matter!

So anyone starting a comic strip for the first time, please do thumbnails!

PENCILS

I always aim to lay out the main elements of the entire comic strip before I go into too much detail.  It saves on having to erase things which you’ve already spent ages on if the positioning needs to be adjusted.

That being said, you can see that I immediately get carried away drawing Miss Faridani, rather than laying out everything else.  Naughty, naughty.
Pencils-1That’s more sensible.  I map out the background characters in Panel 1.
Then I draw in the monster and bus in the circular Panel 2.
Pencils-2Hmmm… not sure about the THWAK! sound effect.
It’s not clear where the noise originates from and isn’t the right sound for a metallic vehicle being pummeled anyway.
I change the sound effect to KERLUNK! and have it surround the bus.
I also start properly mapping out the other characters.
Pencils-3I’m now generally happy with the layout of the first three panels at least.

In Panel 4 however, I’m not sure about the look of that handle that the octopus on the right (Kate) is holding on to.  It needs to look like a handle that can open the window or door, but what with it being attached at both ends to the top of the seat, it looks like its function is as a handrail.

So no problem right? I just tweak the handle to look like it can be turned.  I then flesh out Lucy and Kate while I’m at it.
Pencils-4Well, there is still a bit of an issue.  The back seat of the bus where Lucy and Kate were sitting previously appeared a couple of strips earlier (Strip 91) and there was no such handle to be seen…
91-last-panelNow, its more than likely than very few readers, if any, would notice this, but it would bother me to not sort this out, so I go back to Strip 91 and add a handle to the offending panel.
91-last-panel-UPDATEThat’s one cool thing about webcomics – you can make tweaks even after a comic has gone online and just update the file.  I’ve made a few spelling corrections, dialogue changes and other small alterations in this way, sometimes weeks after a strip is online.
Once a strip has gone into print however it’s obviously not possible to make these changes.

Anyway, we’re now just left with our final panel to do, and I’m having trouble with it.  So here I do the smart thing and try some thumbnails of possible layouts, on a separate sheet of paper – keeping it loose.
Pencils-5-ThumbsThe second one seems to work for me.

While generally thumbnails are drawn much smaller than finished art, this sketch happens to be the right size for the final drawing so I use my lightbox to trace it on to the final piece.
Pencils-6-Lightboxing-ThumbsPhew!  At this stage of creating the strip I feel I can relax a bit.
Having mapped out the rough layouts of the strip, the really brain-taxing work is done!
Pencils-7Now it’s just a case of adding details.  I move on to fleshing out the passengers in Panel 1.Pencils-8Then the last Panel – no need to do it in reading order!Pencils-9I make notes as to which kids will fill the role of the helpless pupils in the central panel.  This is largely based on what colours the characters are resulting in who will look good next to who.Pencils-10It’s worth noting that as with the script, if the strip was going to be worked on by another artist (at the inking stage) I’d make the pencils far tighter.Pencils-11I finish off the final characters and I’m done.
Pencils-12Next time… On to the inks!

For Part 1 of this series of blogs (The Foundations of Writing), click here!
For Part 2: Script, Lettering & Layout, click here!
For Part 4: Inks, click here!
For Part 5: Erasing, Scanning & Cleaning Up click here!
For Part 6: Colours click here!
For a video overview click here!

Interview with Finish the Lucy the Octopus Strip Contest Winner: Saul Taylor

I was so happy with the response to the Finish the Lucy the Octopus Strip Contest that was run over on lucytheoctopus.net at the end of last year.2014-12-17-Saul-Finish-Lucy-StripLondon Based Saul Taylor’s entry nabbed first place for its off kilter humour, a great expression on Lucy’s face and the pathos of trying to draw a friendly smile on the guitar.

I asked Saul a few questions to find out more about the man behind the winning entry…
saul-taylor-beardYou’re a familiar face on the London comic scene, as a vocal fan at various conventions as well as other regular comic based meet ups such as Process, Gosh!p, Laydeez Do Comics and the Comica Social Club.  How did you first get interested in local comic events?
Even though I’d been shopping at Gosh! regularly for years, I had no idea about Gosh!p until several months after it started when I heard about it on the Panel Borders podcast. I wasn’t sure about going (believe it or no I’m incredibly shy, I know that might seem hard to believe to the people that know me via Gosh!p but it’s easier with people I know) but I’m so glad I did. I love discussing comics and I’ve met some awesome people who have become friends.

How long have you been into comics and what started your love of them?
Here comes the origin story. Back in 2007 I decided to re-watch all my Buffy the Vampire Slayer DVDs. I got really obsessed with the show again after not having seen for years. It was around the time the Season 8 comic was starting up so I decided to read that (I know season 8 didn’t finish well but I still have fond memories for the first few story arcs). Anyway, I’d been reading about the comic and I knew that a man by the name of Brian K. Vaughan had written the next story arc, and Joss Whedon would be writing an arc of Vaughan’s Marvel comic Runaways.
This intrigued me so I decided that I’d like to read Runaways, but they didn’t have it in the Hackney libraries system so I got out another Vaughan comic instead called Y: The Last Man. By the time I finished the first trade paperback I knew what I wanted to do with the rest of my life: dedicate it to becoming the world’s number one comics geek.
saul-taylor-oxford-streetIf there were three comics or graphic novels you would suggest a typical non-comics reader should try, what would they be?

That’s an impossible question, because the sort of comic I’d recommend to one person isn’t the sort of thing I’d recommend to another. I’d want to know what sort of thing they liked in terms of TV, film and books without pictures.
If they’re more into action/adventure fantasy/sci-fi type things I’d maybe suggest:
Saga by Brian K. Vaughan and Fiona Staples
The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen by Alan Moore and Kevin O’Neil
Alias by Brian Michael Bendis and Michael Gaydos
But if they tend to prefer more “realistic” or non-fiction type of stuff then maybe they might like to start with:
Palestine by Joe Sacco
The Essential Dykes to Watch Out For by Alison Bechdel
The Nao of Brown by Glyn Dillon
Narrowing it down even for twice the number you asked is hard though, I wish you’d asked me for a top 50.
saul-taylor-rooYou have a unique sense of humour which comes across in your winning Lucy the Octopus competition panel as well as other cartoons and images you’ve produced.  Do you have plans to make more comics or cartoons in this way?  I hope so!
I’ve always wanted to be a writer. Sure, when I was a kid I had other ambitions as well. I wanted to be a Blue Peter presenter and be the Prime Minister (not at the same, I knew if I was busy presenting a twice weekly children’s television programme I wouldn’t have had the time to run the country in my spare time).
Making up stories with ideas I get from my mind is always something I’ve wanted to do. Before I got interested in comics I wanted to create TV shows, but as soon as comics came into my life I wanted to be a comic book writer (and artist, but a writer more).
tumblr_mwvylw61y71t3mgz8o2_1280I came up with idea of creating a character called Captain Utopia (sample above). You can see the first (and so far only) comic I produced about him here! I’ve started writing other stories about him but never managed to finish any of them.  You might be right that I should try to do more in the humour vein than the epic action/adventure sagas with a strong social message that I’ve wanted to do but have managed to finish.
saul-taylor-cardI assume the Lucy panel was produced using Photoshop or similar drawing software.  Is this your preferred medium and do you ever work straight onto paper too?
I use GIMP instead of Photoshop because GIMP is free to download while Photoshop cost hundreds of pounds. I do still do a bit of painting and drawing, but I enjoy digital art making because it has an undo button.
saul-taylor-daleks-assembleYou also produce ceramics which often have a pop culture flavour to them!  How would you compare making 3D ceramics to producing cartoons?
Working with clay takes bloody ages. You can make a model in a few hours but then you have to wait for it to dry which might take weeks if it’s a big piece (you don’t want it to dry to quickly because then it could crack).
Then it has to be fired (if you don’t fire it, it’s just a pile of dry clay that will break into tiny pieces if you look at it in a funny way).
After you fire it you can add glaze and then you can fire it again and hope the glaze stays where you put it instead of trickling down your piece. I can only go to pottery class once a week, so it can take a month of two to get anything finished.
saul-taylor-windowThanks very much Saul.  Good to learn more about you.
Really hope we can all see more work from you soon!

HOW TO MAKE A COMIC STRIP (or more accurately How to make the 93rd instalment of Lucy the Octopus) PART 2: SCRIPT, LETTERING & LAYOUT

For Part 1 of this series of blogs (The Foundations of Writing), click here!

THE SET UP

Right – so I’ve completed the first 92 Lucy the Octopus strips and I’m about to write the script for Episode 93, which will come to look like this upon completion…Planning-01The previous strips set up the story for Lucy (uncool) and Kate (cool) to be knocked out of a school bus, so ultimately they’ll be forced to spend time trapped together in a deep chasm.

Before the arc kicks off properly I decide to run this one-off strip (Episode 89) I’d had in my head for a while, to reconfirm the relationship between Lucy and the cool girls without foreshadowing the upcoming story…  2014-03-05-089The true start of the arc begins with Episode 90 which introduces the idea of our heroine going on the school trip and reconfirms to us how bad a parent her dad is.  It’s good to establish this idea as he’ll be popping up again in this story line in Episode 99.
2014-03-12-090In Episode 91 the reminder of how Lucy is viewed by the cool girls in the school from Episode 89 should pay off.  Miss Faridani’s dialogue also works as exposition, letting the reader know the characters will be traveling a long way from home…
2014-03-19-091Episode 92 is a chance to show the scale of the danger the characters are facing while still keeping the typical humour of the comic in the dialogue. This is the first time in the strip the characters have faced any physical danger, so hopefully that’s an interesting new element for the readers.
2014-03-26-092So that’s where we’re at.  Now what happens next?

WRITING THE SCRIPT

Plot wise for Episode 93 all I need to happen is for Lucy and Kate to be knocked out of the bus.

As with all newspaper style comic strips I try to establish all the reader needs to know in the first panel.  The final panel needs to be a satisfying punchline, resolution or cliffhanger.  Any panels in between the first and last progress between the two in as entertaining a manner as possible.

The opening caption says all we need it to if this was the first Lucy strip the reader had ever come across.
For some strips (like this one!) I sacrifice clarity to new readers in exchange for pay offs for longer term readers.
You can’t spend every strip re-establishing character and premise for the sake of newbies but if you can do that while being entertaining, funny and serving the story that’s of interest to long-time readers, everyone wins.
It’s definitely a balancing act.

Here’s the full script that I wrote…

  • THE SCHOOL COACH HAS ENCOUNTERED A LARGE ERM, THING… / HOLD TIGHT KIDS!  I’M GOING TO STEER AWAY FROM IT!
  • AAAARGHH!  Bus flipped upside down.  Characters fly everywhere including Sandra
  • KATE! GRAB HOLD OF THIS XXXX, OR YOU’LL GET HURT! / YEAH RIGHT!  LIKE I’D SHARE A RAIL WITH THE LIKES OF…
  • Bus flips and KATE falls towards Lucy.
  • Knocks them out the back of the bus?…YOU

As you can see, it’s pretty sketchy stuff.  When I’m writing a script for myself I don’t need to add much detail as I can already picture what’s going on in my head as I write.  It’s good to get the dialogue as tight as possible at this stage but the action notes are just reminders.

When I write a script for someone else to draw I need to give much more detail.  Below you can see the the visual description taken from the script for a couple of panels from Rosie and Jacinda, followed by the finished art.  My friend Zarina Liew drew it.

Classroom of about twenty 14 year olds  – first day of new term and friends are chatting to each other about their Summer break before their teacher comes in.  At front of class (and panel) is Daniella looking awesome in new outfit and chatting to two cliquey friends also fashionably dressed.  Couple of  boys, Kyle and his friend are looking their way (clearly eyeing them up) and talking.
Other kids sat down and talking happily except Jacinda.  She’s sitting alone waiting to get another year of school over with.  The desk next to her is empty.  Jacinda should not be the central focus of the panel – she should almost look like a background “extra”.

Rosie and Jacinda SampleLETTERING

Back to Lucy Episode 93, and I lay out my text on a pre-existing template, using Photoshop.  I have templates set up for 3, 4, 5 and 6 panel strips.
In this instance I knew the panel spacing would be irregular so I just plonked the lettering over any of them to get a sense of the whole canvas area of the strip.Lettering-1---1st-TemplateI print out the lettering template on bog-standard A3 paper.  As you can see I create two Lucy strips on one piece of paper.
Lettering-2---Print-out-templateUsing a lightbox, I trace out where the panel borders (if known) and lettering for the two strips fall, onto good quality drawing paper.  I tend to use a mechanical pencil.
Lettering-3---Template-on-lightboxThen I tape the paper on to my drawing board and using the horizontal bar and set square I rule out the panel borders.
Lettering-4---Layout-traced-from-template

Putting the lettering down before the drawing is very economical timewise.  It shows me exactly how much space I have for my drawings.  Plus I don’t have to waste time drawing anything that will be covered up by speech bubbles later.
Now it’s down on paper I can really start to see how the strip will flow.
And in this case… I don’t like it!

INITIAL TWEAKING OF WORDS AND LAYOUT

I’ve never had to do this before for a Lucy strip but as it’s an unusually action based episode I’ll forgive myself – I go back to my lettering template and I make some changes…
Lettering-5---Rethink-for-lettering--template

      • I need an extra panel where you can actually see the monster, in this case hitting the bus – that’s the green circle.  This new panel should clarify the action and be fun to draw (and hopefully see).
      • Due to the new round panel overlapping with the top of the first, I’m concerned that the reading order will be confusing (a real pet peeve of mine).  I move Miss Faridani’s line “Hold tight kids!  I’m going to steer away from it!” from the bottom of Panel 1 to just below the opening caption.  That way there’s no chance the reader will think that dialogue comes after the circular panel.
      • It will be hard to draw Kate falling into Lucy knocking them out a door in just one small panel, so my solution is that Kate pulls a door handle open by mistake instead.
      • As a result of the above, I need to change the exchange between Lucy and Kate to:
        Lucy:  “KATE! DON’T HOLD THAT HANDLE IT OPENS THE…”Kate (interrupting): “SHUT IT LUCY! WHY SHOULD I LISTEN TO…[YOU!]”

A note about that dialogue:

I had to make a decision as to how much Lucy says before being cut off by Kate.  It’s more natural for Kate to cut Lucy off earlier in the sentence, but the reader needs to see enough of it to be clear what Lucy is intending to say.

She can’t get as far as “KATE! DON’T HOLD THAT HANDLE! IT OPENS THE BACK DOORS…” as Kate needs to impulsively cut Lucy off before learning that information.
“KATE! DON’T HOLD THAT HANDLE! IT OPENS THE BACK…” doesn’t flow well to me from a humour / rhythm perspective plus it could read as if Lucy’s managed to finish her sentence (which for the sake of the story, we don’t want).
“KATE! DON’T HOLD THAT HANDLE! IT OPENS THE…” gives just enough info and flows well.

This is of course extreme minutiae, but it’s the kind of detail that can make or break a strip, in terms of clarity and comedy.

With these changes in mind, I adjust my panel layout on my drawing paper, as before using the lightbox and drawing board…

Lettering-6---Layout-from-updated-templateComing up in Part Three of this blog, I start to actually draw stuff – yeah!

For Part 1 of this series of blogs (The Foundations of Writing), click here!
For Part 3: Pencils, click here!
For Part 4: Inks, click here!
For Part 5: Erasing, Scanning & Cleaning Up click here!
For Part 6: Colours click here!
For a video overview click here!